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One Thousand Tears by ~SailorQuatre:iconSailorQuatre:

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One thousand tears of innermost pain
Washing down the drain
The shower is hot, it sears my soul
And nobody hears me cry.
©2004-2010 ~SailorQuatre
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Author's Comments

I hate my sister. Oh, how I hate her. I hate her, I hate her, I hate her.

And tonight she made me cry...

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~Splic Jul 1, 2004, 6:08:40 PM
That's good, I like how it is so simplistic yet has deep meaning.

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"The future will become the past"
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~AllFades Jul 1, 2004, 6:48:04 PM
:aww: i sorry! :hug: It a great poem though! ^__^ things will get better!

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"Who has a sonic screwdriver?!"
"I do!"
"Who looks at a screwdriver and says 'oh oh, this could be a little more sonic'?!?!"
"What? You never get bored?"
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~SailorQuatre Jul 1, 2004, 6:54:50 PM
Not to sound irate, but it hasn't gotten better in 21 years... why should I think it will get any better ever?

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- One form of abstinence is to not touch used dating sims. -
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~AllFades Jul 1, 2004, 7:16:42 PM
eh... u think that way now but at a good time u'll think wow it did get better... ^^; did u try asking her to stop...um... accusing you of things and bugging you?

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"Who has a sonic screwdriver?!"
"I do!"
"Who looks at a screwdriver and says 'oh oh, this could be a little more sonic'?!?!"
"What? You never get bored?"
:iconsailorquatre:
~SailorQuatre Jul 1, 2004, 7:20:22 PM
Hmm... talk to the bitch? Been there, done that... she's still a bitch. Oh, well. Ce la vie.

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- One form of abstinence is to not touch used dating sims. -
:iconallfades:
~AllFades Jul 1, 2004, 7:49:22 PM
Goman nasai! Vous le triomphe au delà de souer, n'est pas? Moi francais mauvais... excuse moi! ^^:

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"Who has a sonic screwdriver?!"
"I do!"
"Who looks at a screwdriver and says 'oh oh, this could be a little more sonic'?!?!"
"What? You never get bored?"
:iconsailorquatre:
~SailorQuatre Jul 1, 2004, 8:03:12 PM
@_@ Je parle le francais un peu... un petit peu... and my spelling of it is even worse. x.X *took French 1, didn't take anything after that*

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- One form of abstinence is to not touch used dating sims. -
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~starspinner Jul 3, 2004, 3:45:22 PM
ah, we *share* the same place of pain release. so short....and says everything

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"we shall never worry, feel lost or lonely.
for we are where we belong,
you in my heart, and i in yours."
-kelly laursen-
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~AllFades Jul 3, 2004, 6:36:45 PM
non. ur spelling isn't bad! ^_^ i'm in French 2 taking french 3 next year and i'm still horrible at it ^^;

--
"Who has a sonic screwdriver?!"
"I do!"
"Who looks at a screwdriver and says 'oh oh, this could be a little more sonic'?!?!"
"What? You never get bored?"
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